Sunday, May 29, 2011


Some days you wish,life would go slow,
put a pause to the never running flow,
to the rivers,to the winds,
all standing in the same place,a sudden silence,
even if only for a moment,it would change the world,

Perhaps sky and ground would meet,
united by the rain that would fall suddenly afterwards,
and by the thunder that that would unleash,
passing the energy in the ground,
the exchange of courtesies between two different worlds.

And perhaps the winds would unite all the living beings too,
life force travelling through it,
gushing out from old as it enters the new,
as the roses bloom and as the daffodils wither,
uniting all in a silence.

A cool cold smell fills the air,
in the aftermath of the rain that fell,
as leaves rustle,the children come out again,
playing in the grass,laughing,
a sweet song fills the air.

The search for the paradisia,the heaven,ends,
as it has come into the view,of the people who live here,
they are in a better place now,sadness leaking away,
into the void in space,to go away,
from the time,out of existence.

But there is a difference,hard to comprehend,
the sound is softer,the smell is sweeter,
the wind is cooler to touch,and the sun is a colourful rainbow,
an unnoticed appreciation of all that is around,passes through all,
and we were all finally equal in the end.


  1. Such lovely imagery and a matching pic. too."the exchange of courtesies between two different worlds"-this is so poetic and images all the beautiful lines in this poem evokes makes it an almost visual delight. One of the best poems ,I have read in this potluck!
    Butterflies of time(48)

  2. your words create images that dance in the mind...beautiful

  3. Beautiful line, " the roses bloom and as the daffodils wither..."
    The symbolism of the roses and daffodils, blooming and withering.

  4. Oh! my god...such a wonderful expression....I could see the movie kind of thing became a director for a moment myself.....Amazing friend...

  5. Beautiful we all need that moment just to breathe, stop and appreciate the world around us. I am really taken by the second stanza, great job

  6. remarkable words.
    well done.

  7. Wonderful imagery portrayed. Your picture has a cerain calmness about it.
    Nice one!

  8. wow! told with such flow and compassion.

  9. An extremely evocative poem. Shall we dance in the rain? :)

  10. thank you all for your comments... :))
    they mean a lot.